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Post by Gimbaldi on May 8, 2014 19:25:09 GMT
He came from under ancient mounts
Clad in steel and grim
The maul of the keeper in his fist
Whiskers of mithril upon his chin
She came from shadows and a dark embrace
Wreathed in bloody shade
To see her dance would mean their doom
Her beauty would hide her blade
She came from beyond the northern wind
Loyal fury cloaked in fire
A tempest of flame and a storm of quills
Would herald all evil's ire
"It's a work in progress, I am a flautist first and foremost"
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Post by Katalina on May 19, 2014 16:50:53 GMT
It looks good so far my friend, do not forget to put you in there to
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Post by Gimbaldi on May 20, 2014 12:05:24 GMT
Alas, that is the hardest verse of all for my tale before meeting you was sordid and dishonest.
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Post by Gimbaldi on May 20, 2014 12:08:32 GMT
How about...
He came from filthy streets
His questionable honor caused vicious scars
He lied and stole and skulked away
Leaving a trail of broken hearts
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Post by Katalina on May 21, 2014 18:44:48 GMT
We all carry burdens of mistakes, what you do in the now shapes your future. Look at the turning point you reached and the path you now tread. You realise what you did in the past, accept it and let it strengthen your resolve for the good deeds ahead I know you are going to achieve
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Post by Kalatec on May 26, 2014 15:21:35 GMT
I agree with you Kat.
Gimbaldi my love, my past is checkered too although some of what I have had to do was purely to survive now I want to use my skills to aid others.
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Post by Kalatec on May 26, 2014 15:23:35 GMT
maybe you should mention in your song that sometimes even heroes can come from the darker backgrounds and part of this is why they are heroes. We know the darkness that lies in our souls and use that to fight evil in whatever form it takes.
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